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Blue's Wonder by awhitty
151, Apr 26, 2008

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A Fresh flower Blue

 

It's a fresh flower blue.

I wrap it in a sheet

I love it's scent, it's hues.

 

It sips the mist, the dew.

And leaves an odor, a treat

It's a fresh flower blue 

 

It's pets, the bees and crew

They meet, they greet, they eat 

I love it's scent, it's hues

 

From dawn to dusk, they woo

And bask in rain and heat.

It's a fresh flower blue

 

There's a flower for you,

And me.A treat! 

I love it's scent, it's hues 

 

The day I say adeiu,

I send you one so sweet

It's a fresh flower blue

I love it's scent, i t's hues! 

 

- By Agatha Lai

 

 

Although this poem is not by me, I love the descriptive language, and whenever I see this blue flower in the spring day's loamy smell, it makes me think of this lovely poem, and I rejoice.

 

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dkking25 - Apr-29-08 15:26 EDT

Great example of Shallow Depth of Field. The coloring is quite nice too. I left all 7's, I love the poem and I think the flower looks spectacular! Great job!
 

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